More PR Tools: Come on Ontario doctors, how can you advise the population with such sloppy writing?

I am continually amazed at how first rate organizations like the Ontario Medical Association pay good money to newswires to distribute such flawed news releases. The copy below commits numerous fundamental errors, including word repeats that can easily be avoided. Here’s how:

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Staying safe — Top 10 things Ontario doctors are asking you for this holiday season (15 words)